Here's my naive calculation. What's wrong with this?
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- ie^{iS} \frac{{\partial e^{ - iS} }}{{\partial t}} = - ie^{iS} \left( { - i\frac{{\partial S}}{{\partial t}}} \right)e^{ - iS} = \\
- i\left( {1 + iS - \frac{1}{2}S^2 - \frac{i}{6}S^3 + \frac{1}{{24}}S^4 + - - \cdots } \right)\left( { - i\frac{{\partial S}}{{\partial t}}} \right)\left( {1 - iS - \frac{1}{2}S^2 + \frac{i}{6}S^3 + \frac{1}{{24}}S^4 + - - \cdots } \right) = \\
- \left( {1 + iS - \frac{1}{2}S^2 - \frac{i}{6}S^3 + \frac{1}{{24}}S^4 + - - \cdots } \right)\frac{{\partial S}}{{\partial t}}\left( {1 - iS - \frac{1}{2}S^2 + \frac{i}{6}S^3 + \frac{1}{{24}}S^4 + - - \cdots } \right) = \\
- \left( {1 + iS - \frac{1}{2}S^2 - \frac{i}{6}S^3 + \frac{1}{{24}}S^4 + - - \cdots } \right)\left( {\dot S - i\dot SS - \frac{1}{2}\dot SS^2 + \frac{i}{6}\dot SS^3 + \frac{1}{{24}}\dot SS^4 + - - \cdots } \right) = \\
\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\, - \left( {\dot S - i\dot SS - \frac{1}{2}\dot SS^2 + \frac{i}{6}\dot SS^3 + \frac{1}{{24}}\dot SS^4 + - - \cdots } \right) \\
\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\, - \left( {\,\,\,\,\,\,\,iS\dot S\,\, + S\dot SS - \frac{i}{2}S\dot SS^2 - \frac{1}{6}S\dot SS^3 + \frac{i}{{24}}S\dot SS^4 + - - \cdots } \right) \\
\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\, - \left( {\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\, - \frac{1}{2}S^2 \dot S\,\, + \frac{i}{2}S^2 \dot SS + \frac{1}{4}S^2 \dot SS^2 - \frac{i}{{12}}S^2 \dot SS^3 - \frac{1}{{48}}S^2 \dot SS^4 + + - - \cdots } \right) \\
\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\, - \left( {\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\, - \frac{i}{6}S^3 \dot S\, - \frac{1}{6}S^3 \dot SS + \frac{i}{{12}}S^3 \dot SS^2 + \frac{1}{{36}}S^3 \dot SS^3 - - + + \cdots } \right) - - - \cdots = \\
\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\,\, - \dot S - i\left[ {S,\dot S} \right] + \frac{1}{2}\left[ {S,\left[ {S,\dot S} \right]} \right] + \frac{i}{6}\left[ {S,\left[ {S,\left[ {S,\dot S} \right]} \right]} \right] - - + + \cdots \\
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