Good work!
A couple of comments: These aren't corrections, more like refinements, like how the pros would do it slightly differently.
1) It is considered bad design practice* to use the power supply voltages for anything except to power devices. Any connection into the signal path like the offset function you needed in this problem is a bad idea. The power supply voltages (usually) aren't intended to be very precise, they are noisy, and can create some really annoying cross coupling between different parts of the system. For example, if this circuit was used in an audio synthesizer, you would probably have lots of hum, pops & clicks, or and other noise at the output (in addition to your triangle wave) that was injected into your signal path through R6. So, in practice you would add a voltage reference of some sort (Zener diode, IC, etc.) to provide a clean and stable reference voltage for your offset.
* In the real world "bad design practice" means a circuit that mostly works but may have problems like low reliability, poor performance, hard to build, expensive, etc. (i.e there are better ways to do it).
2) It's much harder to buy a 3.5KΩ resistor than a 3.48KΩ resistor. Same for many other common values. Resistors are most often supplied with
EIA standard values (usually the 1% tolerance for analog designs, in my experience). This really doesn't matter for homework problems or understanding. Theoretically useless, but how the real world works. Similar to choosing nut and bolt sizes. As an aside, I can usually immediately tell if a schematic was drawn by a very experienced engineer by things like this. You really wouldn't learn about these details until you had to choose resistors from a standard list (your stock room, distributors, etc.). For example, go online to your favorite distributor (I like https://www.digikey.com/en/products/filter/chip-resistor-surface-mount/52) and search for a 3.5KΩ 1% 0805 SMT resistor, see how many choices there are. Then do the same for 3.48KΩ.
3) If you adjusted your offset so that the output didn't go below 0V ever, then there would be no need for a negative power supply, you could replace it with a ground connection. You would have to choose an op-amp that can output 0V though, but these are common.
If you have lots of free time and you want a puzzle to solve, try this design using an
LM10 op-amp with it's built-in reference and single supply capability. That might be how I would do it.
edit: These are especially not corrections, since this is clearly an unrealistic exercise. No one actually makes triangle waves by starting with 4 synchronized sinewaves. Even if those sinewaves already existed in my design, I wouldn't use them for this.