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I'm not clear on the meaning of the statement:
"The distribution of charge on the inner wire is given by ##q(z,t) = Q_0\cos \left( \omega( \frac{z}{c}-t) \right)##"
Does ##q(z, t)## represent the amount of charge on the wire at position ##z## at time ##t##? That doesn't make sense to me. How can there be a finite amount of charge located at one value of ##z##?
But, suppose we go ahead and assume that the charge per unit length ##\lambda(z,t)## on the wire is given by
##\lambda(z,t) =\frac{\partial q}{\partial z} = -\frac{\omega}{c} Q_0 \sin \left( \omega( \frac{z}{c}-t) \right)##
The current ##I(z,t)## is not given by ##\large \frac{\partial q(z,t)}{\partial t}##. Rather, see if you can show that
##\large \frac {\partial I}{\partial z} = -\frac{\partial \lambda}{\partial t}##.
You can then use this relation to derive the expression for ##I(z, t)##.
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Note that your result for ##I(z,t)## has the opposite sign of ##\lambda(z, t)##. The directions of E and B will then be such that the Poynting vector propagates energy in the
negative-z direction. But I think you should find that the energy propagates in the
positive-z direction.