What you have is not an equation... An equation always has an = sign between two expressions.
You're on the right track, based on a quick scan, but you're not done. Cartesian form means a + bi (or a + jb, as you are writing things.)
One thing, though -- the first image (which by the way we discourage) has what appears to be the magnitude of the numerator. Because you posted an image, I can't copy just the numerator to show you what I mean.
One other thing -- the work in the inages is very neat, but not well organized. You start off with an expression that you're supposed to simplify, but you have other things in there that are elaborations of parts of what you're working on, and there are indications that what you're starting with and what you're ending with are actually equal. The = symbol is used for that purpose.