Well that is a great little circuit. I have no idea where you might have got it from.
There are a few possible reasons why it might under-perform. If you want to learn, you will need to scratch your head and study the cryptic clues and the circuits.
1. The Q1 collector bias current will be insufficient to drive the discriminator. The last time I saw that circuit, it was mass produced in the switched AGC speed circuit of Icom's R71A communications receiver. It did not work there either.
2. The current supplied by V3 will be a little higher than you might expect, or the voltage a little less. LTspice really did not imagine that infinite impedance voltage source topology was possible, so it could not give an error message.
3. Where are the transformer winding phase dots? It appears that the transformer has been wound backwards on the three axes of a one gallon(US) Kline bottle.
4. D2 discriminator current flows like a very confused rat in a maze, without an exit. I have heard it said that rats leave a sinking ship, but your discriminator traps the rats. Don't worry, it is still floating, they will not drown. They are quite safe and quarantine is also secure, because they cannot run down the AF ratline since they are blocked by the thin layer of dielectric in C16.
5. Why do you short circuit the AF signal with 10,000uF caps, C4 & C5.
6. The output load R10 will weigh a little heavy on the circuit and so will also short circuit the discriminator output.
7. The model excitation IF frequency is a little high at 100 MHz, I would have expected 10.7 MHz.
8. The supersonic modulation might work with an automatic landing system, but it will not get through the AF stage, or your ears.
If you do not answer the questions you are asked, then you cannot be helped.
This is an infinite monkey circuit, it is a real gem. I will keep it for my scrap book.